Абзац №1. вступление / introduction
Во введении озвучивается главная проблема. Автор как бы вступает в дискуссию со стороной, которая придерживается противоположного мнения. Здесь желательно уложиться в 2–3 предложения.
План действий:
- 1 предложение: общая информация и актуальность проблемы;
- 2 предложение: первая точка зрения;
- 3 предложение: вторая точка зрения.
Воспользуйтесь несколькими из предложенных нами ниже вводных слов на английском для эссе. Они помогут вам легко и красиво начать сочинение. Не забудьте рассказать, что существует две противоположных точки зрения на поставленную проблему.
На примере первой темы из демо-версии экзамена «Education is the most valuable thing for a teenager» напишем введение:
«It is a common knowledge that education is important for teenagers as the knowledge gained through good and effective education empowers teenagers to be able to evaluate problems and make better decisions. However, there are plenty of people who think that finding one’s passions is more important for young people’s future than formal education.»
Во время экзамена ваша концентрация и нервы будут на пределе. Поэтому выучите наизусть предложенные вводные фразы. Это необходимо, чтобы вся ваша умственная энергия шла на поиск аргументов и грамотное письмо, а не на подбор подходящих словесных конструкций.
Teens, young people, pupils
13.It should be mandatory for all young people to volunteer
18.Doing sports is essential for young people
02.Some believe that teenagers today are generally rude, lazy and badly behaved
07.Some people think that pupils should be involved in decisions about their school and should…
10.Many young people go to university after leaving school. However, a number of…
11.Some people think that pupils at school should learn practical skills that will help them in later life…
14.A number of people believe that pocket money teaches teenagers to be responsible with money. Others say…
15.Many teenagers enjoy playing computer games. Some people, however, believe that teenagers should spend…
17.Many people believe that producing a school magazine allows pupils to be creative and teaches them many skills
18.Most schoolteachers give their students homework. However, some teenagers today believe that they are …
15.Being yang nowadays is not so easy as it used to be fifty years ago.
01.Why do people study in college? (mp3)
05.Some people think that young people should have as much fun as possible and enjoy themselves…
10. A pupil cannot study effectively without a computer
07.Young people like travelling more than senior citizens. (mp3)
19.Having a computer at home will help their children to get a better education.
08.School classmates make the best friends.
04.It’s important for high school students to study compulsory subjects, even if they don’t see any need …
03.Today young people think only about making money and career.
02.At school students do not study enough modern authors and modern literature.
30.Lots of teenagers want to work part-time to earn their pocket money. However, their parents…
26.Most teachers believe that all subjects at school are equally useful.
24.Some families have an only child; others choose to have two, three or even more children.
22.It is common practice to study a foreign language at school in your own country. However…
20.Some teenagers would like to have a highly paid job; others believe that their future job…
18.Exams are a fair way of testing students.
17.Some people believe that modern teenagers are really awful. However, modern …
16.It is believed, that young people today are not as healthy as they were fifty years ago.
15.Some teenagers dream of becoming rich whereas others consider it to be rather dangerous.
14.Fast food is very popular among teenagers. However, many experts consider fast food …
04.Lots of teenagers are keen on playing computer games. However adults are sure …
02.Lots of teens believe that it’s important to look nice. However, adults often think …
02.Browsing the web is harmful to teenagers.
39. Mess media influences teenagers’ minds.
28. Social media interaction is important for modern teenagers.
23. Young people should follow in their parents’ footsteps when choosing a profession.
3. Our grandparents say their way of life was much more secure. However, young people have many…
Абзац №2. мнение автора / personal opinion
В задании 40 предлагается написать 2–3 предложения в поддержку своего мнения. Мы предлагаем остановиться только на двух и хорошо их расписать. Простая фраза «Я думаю, что образование для подростков необходимо» не даст вам желаемого количества баллов (про все критерии оценки поговорим подробнее ниже).
Как бы обидно это ни звучало, экзаменатора ваше мнение на самом деле не интересует. Вы пришли на экзамен не для того, чтобы показать всем, как писать статью на английском, которую потом опубликуют в международном научном журнале. Главная задача учащегося — успешно расписать все пункты плана, поэтому защищайте ту позицию, для которой будет легче придумать доказательства.
Чтобы соединить аргументы и получить связный текст, используйте готовые фразы для сочинения по английскому:
- Мнение автора: «as for me» («что касается меня»), «I believe» («я верю»), «I consider that» («я считаю, что…»), «it seems to me that» («мне кажется, что…»), «in my opinion» («по моему мнению»);
- Аргумент 1: «to begin with» («начнем с того, что…»), «first» («прежде всего»), «first of all» («в первую очередь»);
- Аргумент 2: «besides» («кроме того»); «furthermore» («более того»); «what is more» («вдобавок»); «moreover» («сверх того»).
Тогда второй абзац может выглядеть следующим образом:
«In my opinion, if a teenager receives proper education they are more equipped for a life ahead of them. First, formal education provides youngsters with important life skills such as literacy and numeracy skills, as well as critical thinking. Without those, one can barely get through a day without a struggle.
Furthermore, it is inevitable that the younger generation will face situations in their adulthood when their rights are compromised. However, having received formal education, they will be able to recognise when it happens and ensure their rights are respected.»
Абзац №3. противоположная точка зрения / opposing opinion
В третьем абзаце ваша цель — рассказать о противоположной точке зрения и придумать для нее 1–2 доказательства. На данном этапе стоит подсчитать, сколько слов вы написали. Это необходимо, чтобы понять, сколько аргументов вы можете себе позволить в этом параграфе, чтобы уложиться в лимит слов. Важно помнить, что каждый аргумент из третьего параграфа вам надо будет опровергнуть в четвертом.
Мнение противоположной стороны:
- Some people believe it is better… (некоторые считают, что лучше…);
- Nevertheless, one can consider this problem from another angle (тем не менее на эту проблему можно посмотреть под другим углом);
- However, there exists another point of view on this issue (однако существует другая точка зрения на этот вопрос);
- There is another side to the issue/question of… (есть другая сторона этого вопроса…);
- There are people who have the opposing opinion (у некоторых людей противоположное мнение.
Аргумент 1: «first of all» (прежде всего), «the first thing to be considered is» (первая тема, о которой стоит поговорить…), «they say that» (люди считают, что…);
Аргумент 2: «another fact is that» (другой факт заключается в том, что…), «besides» (кроме того).
В итоге получается такой текст:
«There are people who have the opposing opinion. They say that teenagers will benefit more if they are allowed to follow their passion instead of being put through 11 years of formal school education. Indeed, if young people get to do what gives them satisfaction, they will live a more fulfilled life.»
Банк идей и аргументов в эссе (английский язык егэ) — articles

В этом разделе мы собрали аргументы, подкрепляющие идеи для самых популярных эссе по английскому языку ЕГЭ. Сосредоточение только на второй и третьей части сочинения поможет быстрее ознакомиться с возможными аргументами, поддерживающими вашу точку зрения. Очень часто ученик, даже хорошо владеющий языком, не может найти подходящие аргументы подкрепляющие его высказывания. Ознакомившись с нашими вариантами ответов, вы пополните свою «базу аргументов«, что облегчит написание второй части письменного задания С2.
Ответы составлены по определенной структуре «утверждение-пример«, что облегчает написание эссе. Чтобы не потерять фокус и полностью раскрыть тему сочинения, мы советуем, перед тем как вы приступите к сочинению, составить «пару» — суть сочинения и подумать о синонимах релевантных заданной теме.
Вербицкая М.В., 2022 год
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The weather affects the way people feel and behave. <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: affects – does not not
Синонимы: Influence / impact / effect / mood / act / behavior / feelings


мнение: In my opinion the weather has an affect on the way people feel and behave. 1. утверждение People are part of the environment and have a direct connection with it. примерFor example, rain influences people’s mood because they feel sad when it rains and everything around is gloomy. 2. утверждениеSecondly, clear sunny weather raises one’s mood. примерFor instance, when it is sunny people’s behaviour becomes more upbeat, kind, tolerant and gentle. Moreover, vitamin D that is absolutely necessary for people’s life can be only produced by exposure to sun light. |
Read by George William Dole
Digital literacy is the key to success in any occupation <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: the key – not important
Синонимы: essential / crucial / computer / skills / ignorance / profession


мнениеIn my opinion computer literacy is one of the most important skills one can have to be successful. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, computers have become an integral part of people’s life. Whatever a person does at work or at home they have to deal with digital technologies. примерFor example, people pay bills, order food on-line, or buy tickets by using different gadgets. 2. утверждениеSecondly, if a person wants to get a job, he or she has to fill in a form before being taken. примерFor instance, each form always has a question of one’s level of computer fluency. If a person writes that they have a low level of computer literacy, the chances of getting a job is low. |
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Education is the most important possession a person can have <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: Education- family
Синонимы: key to success / treasure / valuable thing / attribute


мнениеIn my opinion education is the most important attribute that characterizes a successful person. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, education is the key to success in life. пример For example, if someone has a good education, he or she usually gets a well-paid job that allows them to do a lot of interesting things. 2. утверждениеSecondly, those who have a good education gain respect in society. примерFor instance, professors or academies have a lot of respect. People listen to their lectures, taking their opinion as the truth. |
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One should read about historical sites before sightseeing <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: should – should not
Синонимы: Study / learn / important places


мнениеIn my opinion one should read about a place he or she wants to visit before going there. 1.утверждениеFirst of all, if a person reads something before visiting, they will remember the information better. пример For example, there is a saying, “revising is the mother of education.” 2. утверждение Secondly, one does not need a guide if people learn about the places they want to visit themselves. примерFor instance, a person can read everything by books or the Internet and then go to the place just to see what they want with their own eyes. It can save a lot of money for the traveler. |
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Creative hobbies help to cope with stress <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: yes, helps – does not help
Синонимы: Interesting / allow / interests / fight / handle


мнение In my opinion creative hobbies allow people to fight stress. 1. утверждение First of all, being immersed in a hobby lets a person forget about stress since stress and joy that arrives from a hobby are antagonists. примерFor example, if a person really likes embroidery, he or she is happy when they are doing it, which means there is no place for stress in their mind. 2. утверждение Secondly, hobbies are usually relaxing and I would say even therapeutic. пример For instance, it is a scientific fact that those who have hobbies live a longer and happier life. Joy that comes from such activity has a healing power. |
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Friendship is the greatest gift of life <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: friendship – money
Синонимы: Position / valuable thing


мнениеIn my opinion the most valuable thing in life one can have is friendship. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, friendship is a part of human nature. примерFor example, without it people feel lonely and sad. One needs to have someone to talk with, to be understood, to share their thoughts and ideas. 2. утверждениеSecondly, there is a saying, “a friend in need is a friend indeed”. пример. For instance, a true friend will always help in times of trouble, supporting his friends emotionally and practically. |
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Music is something that distracts people from daily routine <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: distracts – doesn’t distract
Синонимс: Melody / makes another focus / dull work / regular things


мнениеIn my opinion listening to music changes the focus of listeners from routine chores to the melody. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, being immersed in music, helps a person forget about daily routine since consciousness cannot be focused on two things at a time. примерFor example, if a person is listening to music and feels happy, he or she usually does not pay any attention to the regular things that they are doing. Such dull work is being done automatically. 2. утверждение Secondly, music is usually relaxing and I would say even therapeutic. пример For instance, it is a scientific fact that those who listen to music often live a longer life. Stress that might come from doing daily routines gets neutralized by positive emotions that arrive from listening to the music. |
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Following fashion trends is a waste of time and money <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: waste – is not waste
Синонимы: To be fashionable / killing time / slander money


мнениеIn my opinion if a person follows some modern trends they lose valuable things in life. 1.утверждение First of all, it takes a lot of time and energy. примерFor example, such people go to different beauty salons and read a lot of fashion magazines. 2.утверждениеSecondly, it takes a lot of money to keep yourself looking nice. примерFor instance, good perfume and clothes cost a fortunate nowadays. Moreover, It is also a never ending process because fashion changes frequently. |
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An early choice of a career path is the key to success <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: the earlier the better – the later the better
Синонимы: Major / specialty / efficiently / effectively / bachelor’s degree / related field


мнениеIn my opinion the earlier one choses his or her career the better chances to success they have. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, early chosen career gives one an opportunity to get more experience. примерFor example, a lot of computer program writers started programming when they were about 7 years old. By the age of twenty two they have much experience behind them. 2. утверждение Secondly, choosing a career path early allows one to focus their education directly on their career specialty. примерFor example, those aspiring to go into the field of biotech can begin their career training by earning a bachelor’s degree in biological science or a related field, including chemistry, molecular biology, or biochemistry. Moreover, it also helps one utilize their school time more efficiently. |
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It’s better to read a book rather than watch its screen version <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: read books – movies
Синонимы: Film / movie / imagination / perception


мнениеIn my opinion reading a book is more informative than watching a movie. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, when a person reads a book, he or she learns more details. примерFor example, an author describes a tower and spends a few pages to say about its story. In the movie it is often just shown for a few seconds. 2.утверждениеSecondly, it is a scientific fact that reading develops imagination. примерFor example, a person imagines everything they read in their own way. When people watch a movie, they see the movie director’s perception. |
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A person who is fluent in a foreign language can easily work as an interpreter <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: can work – can not work
Синонимы: Bilingual / good at


мнениеI do not think that a person who speaks a few fluent languages can be an interpreter. 1.утверждениеFirst of all, interpreting and speaking are different skills. примерFor example, even bilinguals, people who speak two languages from their birth, study interpreting for a few years in an university to do it properly. 2.утверждениеSecondly, one should love interpreting to work as an interpreter. примерFor instance, interpreters usually work in pairs and change each other every twenty minutes. It is all because the pressure on the nervous system of an interpreter is compered with a pilot of a super jet. |
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Some people think that Russian is easier to learn than English <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: Russian is easier – English is easier
Синонимы: Endings / prefixes / pronouns


мнениеIn my opinion Russian is more difficult than English. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, Russian language has changing endings. примерFor example, according to its pronouns the endings of adjectives change, which means a learner has to remember a lot of cases. In English they remain the same, she is clever, they are clever etc. 2.утверждениеSecondly, Russian has many more prefixes than English. примерFor instance, almost for each verb one can add a few different prefixes that changes the meaning of the verb slightly or strongly. Moreover, there are not really strict and logical rules in using these prefixes and endings. |
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Clothes people are wearing can influence their behavior <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: influences – doesn’t influence
Синонимы: Impact / way to behave


мнениеIn my opinion people’s clothes really impact the way they behave. 1.утверждение First of all, nowadays clothes have become a part of people’s image and a way of behavior. примерFor example, people of different occupations dress differently. A person in a suit of policeman cannot act as a person wearing a sport suit. 2. утверждение Secondly, by changing clothes, a person can change their lives. пример It is a scientific fact that people are conditioned by many things, like food, cars, social status and clothes have the strongest position in this list. For instance, wearing aristocrat’s or businessmen clothes people try to act accordingly to match this image. |
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High school students should study only the subjects they choose <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: subjects they choose – compulsory subjects
Синонимы: Learn / major / specialty / efficiency


мнениеIn my opinion students at the final grades ought to study the subjects they consider most useful. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, students usually know what they want to be even in Primary School and should learn the subjects accordingly. примерFor example, the subjects that are connected to their future specialty should be given special emphasis. 2. утверждениеSecondly, if a person chooses the subject, he or she will study it better. примерFor example, it is a scientific factthat anything that is studied with pleasure leaves stronger impressions in memory. The efficiency of such studying is much higher than if a person is forced to study something they do not like. |
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Every city and every town should have a zoo <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: should – should not
Синонимы: Entertainment / protect / extinct


мнениеIn my opinion it would be great if there was a zoo in each town. 1.утверждениеFirst of all, zoos are a wonderful entertainment for children. примерFor example, when a family goes to the zoo children feel really excited. They spend hours of walking around, eating ice cream and feeding some animals. 2. утверждениеSecond, zoos really are educational for children, as well as adults. примерFor example, children see new animals and learn information about them, broadening their minds. This way of learning is much more efficient than learning about animals by books. |
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Childhood is the safest period of human life <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: safest – dangerous
Синонимы: Babyhood / infancy / protect / take care


мнениеIn my opinion childhood is the safest period of one’s life. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, parents protect children from all troubles they can get into. примерFor example, parents feed their children and watch them all the time to make sure nothing bad happens to them. 2. утверждениеSecondly, society gives children many rights. примерFor instance, if a child is being mistreated by someone society interferes and makes sure it does not happen again. Moreover, I believe that it is a part of human nature to treat children with care and love. |
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Internet is the greatest time-waster <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: time waste – educational
Синонимы: Time killer / time consumer / time saver


мнениеIn my opinion the Internet is the greatest time saver people ever invented. 1.утверждениеFirst of all, the Internet allows people to search important information they need really fast. примерFor example, if a person has any question, he or she goes to ask it in the Internet and get an answer right away. People do not have to go to libraries anymore. 2.утверждениеSecondly, nowadays the Internet is really educational in terms of lot of people study different subjects distantly. примерFor instance, there are many webinars that teach students mathematics, biology and other academic subjects. They do not need to waste a lot of time going somewhere to take lessons. |
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The circus is the best entertainment for children <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: circus – movies
Синонимы: Kids / entertaining /


мнениеIn my opinion the circus is the most educational and entertaining pastime for children. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, the circus leaves unforgettable impressions in children’s memories. примерFor example, a lot of children still remember some performances from a very young age. 2.утверждениеSecondly, circus performances are interactive. примерFor instance, children often take part in the performance when the clowns or the host go through the aisles and talk with people. Moreover, children also can see different animals and learn new information about them. |
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Exams motivate students to study harder <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: motivate – do not motivate
Синонимы: Tests / inspire/ better / more seriously


мнениеIn my opinion exams make students treat the subject they study more seriously and learn it better. 1. утверждениеFirst of all, any test motivates a person to learn the subject better since the result will be graded. примерFor example, one listens to some information and forgets it right away since they do not know if they need it in their future life. On the other hand, when students know that this information will be tested, they memorize it much better. 2. утверждениеSecondly, the grades students get at exams characterize their level of preparation and ultimately give them a lot of advantages, if their marks are high. примерFor instance, if a person has what we call “Red Diploma”, they enter a university without exams. Moreover, good marks are always pleasant to get. |
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It’s easier to make friends than to keep them <<<< всё сочинение
Пара: motivate – do not motivate
Синонимы: Make / harder / more difficult /


мнениеIn my opinion it is easier to make new friends than to have good relationship with the old ones. 1.утверждениеFirst of all, making new friends takes less time. примерFor example, one can go to a cluband make a lot of new friends in a few hours. 2. утверждениеSecondly, it is easier to impress people when a person just meets them the first time. примерFor instance, people tend to show good qualities in the beginning of any relationship. They are always polite, they smile and are always ready to help. |
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Is Coronavirus (COVID-19) really a problem or just Mass-media noise?
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мнение I think that COVID-19 is a real danger to society. утверждение First of all, COVID-19 works differently compared to previous major viruses. пример For example, it enters deep into human cells and the immune system notices it too late to fight off successfully. утверждение Secondly, the virus has quickly caused a Pandemic, “a world epidemic”, that has not happened with other viruses for over a 100 years. пример For instance, after only 2 months it is hard to find a country that has not yet been infected with COVID-19. Moreover, it has already caused a huge economic collapse in a lot of countries. |
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A Difficult life situation is an opportunity to learn something or cruel fate?
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мнение In my opinion, any times of trouble can teach a person a lot of new and important things. утверждение First of all, when problems appear, a person has to leave his or her comfort zone and start thinking and acting in another way to solve the situation. пример For example, John Rockefeller’s fiancée left him because he did not have enough money. We all know what happened then. утверждение Secondly, having gotten into trouble, a person starts thinking differently. пример For instance, after being kicked out of Apple Inc., Steve Jobs became more content with his life and more open, thereby happier. |
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Some people think that to get a good education one should go abroad.
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мнение: In my opinion, one can get an excellent education in his or her own country. утверждение First of all, studying in a native country is cheaper. пример For example, in order to obtain the same skills and proficiency a person will spend much less money comparing with studying abroad. утверждение Secondly, if a person goes somewhere to study, their learning efficiency drops. пример For instance, any new culture takes a lot of time to get used to it. As a result students lose their focus and the quality of education falls down. |
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Winter sports are the best way to develop stamina.
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мнение: In my opinion, winter sports improve people’s stamina best of all. утверждение First of all, the main winter sports such as cross country skiing; downhill skiing, and ice-skating require monotonous repetition of the same physical motions, which is the best way to strengthen endurance. пример For example, when one skis, he or she puts on skis, takes two ski sticks moves forward for hours. утверждение Secondly, it is a scientific factthat human the body develops endurance better in winter. пример For instance, the same Scandinavian skiing movements during summer time give worse results, although the type of motions a sportsman does is essentially the same. |
мнение: In my opinion, summer sports improve people’s stamina best. утверждение First of all, the main summer sports such as football require fast running and a lot of acceleration. пример For example, when a person plays football he or she has to run really fast which sometimes they do a lot of times during a match. утверждение Secondly, summer time is usually hot and it increases the pressure on people’s endurance, consequently developing it. пример For instance, if a person runs fast when it is over 30 degrees Centigrade, his or her body can endure extremely detrimental pressure. |
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An interesting plot is the main factor to contribute to a good movie.
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мнение: In my opinion, an exciting plot is the most important contribution to any good, and interesting movie. утверждение First of all, good plots grip one’s attention and keep it during the entire film. пример For example, when a person cannot guess what is going to happen next then he or she watches the movie with increased interest and attention. утверждение Secondly, gripping scenarios make a movie highly unpredictable. пример For instance, Nikita Mikhalkov’s movie “12” is noticeably difficult to predict therefore it keeps people’s attention really well. |
Read by Neil Geitz
Studying online is more interesting than studying at school.
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мнение: In my opinion, studying at school is the most interesting way to get a good education. утверждение First of all, there are a lot of classmateswho make the process of education really exciting. пример For example, when a person studies something in an environment of supportive company the interest increases due to student teamwork. утверждение Secondly, the contact between students and teachers is better. пример For instance, teachers can better see if students learn something or not when they see students face to face. Consequently, teachers can explain course materials most interestingly in a physical classroom. |
мнение: In my opinion, studying on-line is the most interesting way to get a good education. утверждение First of all, there are a lot of interesting e-books and educational materials on the Internet. пример For example, one can learn information from different sourses that actually increases efficiency of the learning process. утверждение Secondly, a person can choose convenient times when he or she needs to do studying and not waste time traveling to and from school. Moreover, people can choose a comfortable place to study which helps them focus. |
Read by Neil Geitz
Virtual Internet communication results in losing real-life social skills.
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мнение: In my opinion, if one communicates mainly online, he or she will lose their abilities to interact in real-life. утверждение First of all, when people communicate face-to-face they get a lot of nonverbal information. пример For example, when talking with a real person, people unconsciously notice many things by gestures, which is a good skill that requires special development. утверждение Secondly, talking to a real person makes people be more polite. пример For instance, many people allow themselves to be really rude when they communicate online. They offend others without being afraid of suffering any consequences of it right away. |
мнение: In my opinion, communication online is as real as offline and communication on the Internet does not reduce abilities to interact in real-life. утверждение First of all, when people communicate on the Internet they share the same ideas and emotions as in real-life. пример For example, when talking with a person on Skype, people laugh, rejoice, and experience the same emotions. утверждение Secondly, after developing a good friendship online in the beginning, when people meet each other in real-life they continue communicating with the same pleasure. |
Read by George William Dole
Клише для сочинений
Выражения мнения:
- I agree/ disagree
- In my opinion, … / From my point of view, … / As far as I am concerned, …
- I believe that…/ It seems to me that…
- I am in favour of… / I am against the idea of…
- According to…
- Some people say that…
- It is said/believed that…
- There is no doubt that…
- It cannot be denied that…
- It goes without saying that…
- We must admit that…
Представление аргументов:
- The main argument against/in favour is…
- First of all, I would like to consider…
- The first thing I would like to consider is…
- To begin with, …/ To start with, …
- Despite the fact that…/ In spite of the fact that…
- On the one hand, … /On the other hand, …
- Besides,…/ In addition,…
- What is more, …/ Moreover, …/ More than that, …
- Finally, …
- However, … / …, though
- …although…
- Nevertheless,…
Логические связки:
- for this reason
- therefore/that is why
- thus sth happened because of/as a result of/owing to/due to/as a consequence of
Примеры:
- For example
- For instance
- Such as
- Like
Заключение:
- To sum up, …
- To conclude, I would argue that…
- On this basis, I can conclude that…
- In conclusion, I would like to stress that…
- All in all, I believe that…
Критерии оценки
Надеемся, после предложенного детального разбора, последнее задание ЕГЭ по английскому языку будет вам не страшно. Остается ознакомиться с тем, как ваше эссе будут оценивать экзаменаторы? За выполнение этого задания учащийся может получить 14 баллов.
- «3» — решение коммуникативной задачи;
- «3» — организация текста;
- «3» — лексика;
- «3» — грамматика;
- «2» —орфография и пунктуация.
Критерии оценки ЕГЭ можно найти на сайте ФИПИ. Ниже даем расшифровку того, как эссе будут оцениваться экзаменаторами.
Коммуникативная задача. Четко следуйте заданной теме.
Организация. Эссе должно быть разделено на пять абзацев, которые логично связаны друг с другом вводными конструкциями. 
Лексика. Используйте фразы для сочинения по английскому, которые мы показали выше. Шаблоны, клише и вводные фразы — ваши друзья, зовите их на помощь. Задействуйте синонимы и нейтральную речь.
Грамматика. Употребляйте слова правильно и избегайте любых грамматических ошибок.
Орфография и пунктуация. Сочинение должно быть читаемым, поэтому пишите как можно понятней. Письмо в стиле «как курица лапой» выйдет в ноль баллов. 
Пунктуационные ошибки
Пишите эссе разборчиво, иначе можно потерять полбалла.
- Запятой обособляются придаточные предложения, если они стоят перед главным предложением. Например, While some advocate for less green gas emissions, others promote building more coal mines. (пока одни добиваются уменьшения парниковых газов, другие выступают за строительство еще большего количества угольных шахт).
- Запятыми обособляются вводные слова и фразы, если они стоят в начале или середине предложения. Например, In other words, the world is ready for young people to introduce better policies. (другими словами, мир готов к тому, чтобы молодые люди представляли лучшие законопроекты). Или другой вариант, Tourism is great for the economy, thus more countries should be working on attracting foreign tourists. (туризм хорошо влияет на экономику, поэтому больше стран должны работать над привлечением иностранных туристов).
- Запятыми разделяются два и более равнозначных прилагательных, если они описывают одно существительное и между ними можно поставить союз and. Например, He is a strong, healthy man. (He is a strong and healthy man) (он сильный, здоровый мужчина).






