Критерии оценивания письма
- Решение коммуникативной задачи (2 балла);
- Организация текста (2 балла);
- Языковое оформление текста (2 балла).
Максимальное количество баллов за задание – 6.
Давайте рассмотрим такой образец личного письма:
Hi Ronny,
Thank you for the e-mail! I am glad to hear from you. I'm sorry I couldn't answer earlier because I was busy with my exams.
In your message you asked me about summer. You know, the weather here is varied in this season. It can be rather hot in the south of the country and cool in the north. As for me, I prefer summer, this is the season when we have vacations. This summer I am planning to go the summer camp, then my parents are going to take me to the country.
By the way, I'd like to know more about your uncle. Where does your uncle live? Has he got a family? How long is he going to stay with you? I've got to go now, as I've got lots of homework to do.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
AliceВ данном письме 145 слов (в рамки уложились).
В обращении должно быть имя, после имени не забываем ставить запятую!
В начале электронного письма должна быть выражена благодарность за полученное письмо, ссылка на предыдущие контакты не является обязательной:
Thank you for your e-mail! I am glad to hear from you!
В следующем предложении желательно написать о том, почему мы не могли ответить ранее и извиниться за задержку:
I’m sorry I couldn’t answer earlier because I was busy with my exams.
Переходим к ответам на вопросы при помощи такого соединительного предложения:
In your message you asked me about summer.
Отвечаем на каждый вопрос одним сложным или двумя простыми предложениями. Одно простое предложение в качестве ответа на вопрос считается как неполный ответ.
You know, the weather here is varied in this season. It can be rather hot in the south of the country and cool in the north. As for me, I prefer summer, this is the season when we have vacations. This summer I am planning to go the summer camp, then my parents are going to take me to the country.
Далее мы задаем три вопроса другу по конкретной теме. В данном случае, например, необходимо задать вопросы про дядю:
By the way, I’d like to know more about your uncle. Where does your uncle live? Has he got a family? How long is he going to stay with you?
Завершаем письмо, указывая причину:
I’ve got to go now, as I’ve got lots of homework to do.
Указываем ссылку на будущие контакты:
Keep in touch!
Пишем завершающую фразу и Ваше имя на отдельной строке, точки в конце не ставим:
Yours,
Alice
Для осуществления логической связи между предложениями Вам необходимо использовать в тексте письма вводные слова и выражения, а также личные местоимения.
В данном примере были использованы:
As for me, – что касается меня
You know, – ты знаешь
By the way, – кстати
В письме достаточно 3-4 таких выражений, не перегружайте ими письмо, а также помните о стиле, такие выражения, как “moreover”, “nevertheless” и прочие, характерные для публицистического/официального стиля, нам не подойдут.
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План письма
- обращение (слева, на отдельной строке), например, Dear Jim/Alice, Hello/ Hi Jim/Alice;
- благодарность за полученное письмо, ссылка на предыдущие контакты не является обязательной (начало письма) например, «Thank you for your (recent) message. I was very glad to hear from you (again)», «Thanks for writing to me. I’m always glad to get emails./ I always like to read your emails. /I enjoy reading your messages and writing to you.» и т.д;
- ответы на три вопроса друга по переписке (основная часть письма). Для того чтобы письмо было логичным, можно использовать фразы: «You asked me about … Well, I can say that …» или «As you are interested in … I’d like to tell you that …» и т. п.;
- три вопроса другу по переписке на тему, указанную в задании, при этом не забываем про соединительную фразу/предложение, чтобы вопросы были логично связаны с предыдущим текстом;
- упоминание о дальнейших контактах, например, «Write back soon»; «Hope to hear from you soon»; «Please, write to me soon» и т. д. (можно писать на отдельной строке или в конце текущего абзаца);
- завершающая фраза, например, «Best wishes»; «All the best»; «With love»; «Yours» (на отдельной строке);
- подпись автора (только Ваше имя, на отдельной строке).
Примеры заданий егэ по теме "письмо" по английскому языку —
| Для ответов на задания С1, С2 используйте Бланк ответов №2. При выполнении заданий С1 и С2 особое внимание обратите на то, что ваши ответы будут оцениваться только по записям, сделанным в Бланке ответов №2. Никакие записи черновика не будут учитываться экспертом. При заполнении Бланка ответов №2 вы указываете сначала номер задания С1, С2, а потом пишете свой ответ. Если одной стороны Бланка недостаточно, вы можете использовать другую сторону Бланка. |
Cl You have 20 minutes to do this task.
You have received a letter from your friend who writes:
| Dear Andrew, I really need your advice. The problem is my relationship with the classmates. You know I don’t smoke and they say I’m still a baby. That’s not true! I don’t want to smoke. It’s my personal style, I think smoking is dangerous for my health. What do you think on the problem? How can I persuade them? Yours, Sasha |
Write a letter to Sasha. In your letter express your opinion and advise him what to do.
Write 100—150 words.
C2 You have 40 minutes to do this task.
Comment on the following statement.
“If you want happiness for an hour — take a nap. If you want happiness for a day — go fishing. If you want happiness for a month — get married. If you want happiness for a year — inherit a fortune. If you want happiness for a lifetime — help someone else.” (Chinese proverb)
What is your opinion?
Write 200—250 words.
Use the following plan:
- make an introduction (state the problem);
- express your personal opinion and reasons for it;
- give arguments for the other point of view and explain why you don’t agree;
- draw a conclusion.
Cl You have 20 minutes to do this task.
You have received a letter from your friend who needs your advice. He writes:
Compare your friend’s two choices and explain which one you think he should make. Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Write 100—150 words.
C2 You have 40 minutes to do this task.
Comment on the following statement.
“It is important to have someone who’s supportive, a person you can go to with your problem, but someone discreet, who doesn’t go around telling everyone your secrets. I think it’s also important if your friend shares some of your interests and hobbies, has a similar sense of humour, so that you can understand each other better.”
What is your opinion?
Write 200—250 words.
Use the following plan:
- make an introduction (state the problem);
- express your personal opinion and reasons for it;
- give arguments for the other point of view and explain why you don’t agree;
- draw a conclusion.
Cl You have 20 minutes to do this task.
You have received a letter from your pen friend Jenny who writes:
| …There are a lot of problems in our life nowadays. Certainly, this ruins our health. So we must be careful to our health. It is important to eat healthy food and do it regularly. From food we get all vitamins and microelements necessary for our body to feel well. It is also very important to go in for sport. Sport and physical exercises make us strong and help us to keep fit. What do you do to be healthy? What food do you eat? How much exercising do you do? What activities help you to be fit? |
Write a letter to Jenny. In your letter express your opinion on the problem of staying healthy and answer the questions.
Write 100—150 words.
C2 You have 40 minutes to do this task.
Comment on the following statement.
“Learning is a treasure that will follow its owner everywhere.” (Chinese proverb)
What is your opinion?
Write 200—250 words.
Use the following plan:
- make an introduction (state the problem);
- express your personal opinion and reasons for it;
- give arguments for the other point of view and explain why you don’t agree;
- draw a conclusion.
Cl You have 20 minutes to do this task.
You have received a letter from your friend who writes:
| … As a result I understood one thing: I have serious problems with my English. I learn the words easily. And I try to learn grammar rules. But unfortunately I cannot use these rules at all. That’s why I make lots of mistakes when I speak or write. And it’s also very difficult for me to speak. I start stammering and forget everything I know. Are there any useful tips in learning English? What should I do to avoid grammar mistakes? Do you think I have a chance to speak a foreign language fluently? What would you recommend me to do? |
Write a letter to your friend. Express your opinion and advise him what to do. Write 100—150 words.
C2 You have 40 minutes to do this task.
Comment on the following statement.
“It is prosperity that gives us friends, adversity that proves them.” (Proverb) What is your opinion?
Write 200—250 words.
Use the following plan:
- make an introduction (state the problem);
- express your personal opinion and reasons for it;
- give arguments for the other point of view and explain why you don’t agree;
- draw a conclusion.
Cl You have 20 minutes to do this task.
You have received a letter from your friend who writes:
| … Last week I had a task to write an essay “An Ideal School as I See It”. It was a very interesting task. I thought it over thoroughly and stated my ideas. My essay was the best. Surely the place where I study is one of the best in the city, but there are some things I want to be changed. For example, I think it would be nice for the students to choose the subjects they want to study. As for me I would choose Mathematics, Chemistry and History. What is your opinion? What is an “ideal school” for you? How should the classrooms be equipped? Do you think it is necessary to have the school rules? Why? |
Write an answer to this letter. In your letter express your opinion and answer the questions.
Write 100—150 words.
С2 You have 40 minutes to do this task.
Comment on the following statement.
“Anorexia is a dangerous eating disorder which often starts in the teenage years. In Britain 5% of girls are anorexic and four out of ten teenage girls skip meals so that they can be thin like fashion models and pop stars. But it’s not just girls — many boys want to lose weight too and they often don’t eat enough.”
Do you think there is such a problem in our country? Is there a way of solving it? What is your opinion?
Write 200—250 words.
Use the following plan:
- make an introduction (state the problem);
- express your personal opinion and reasons for it;
- give arguments for the other point of view and explain why you don’t agree;
- draw a conclusion.
Cl You have 20 minutes to do this task.
You have received a letter from your English-speaking friend Kate who writes:
| Hi, Mary, Thank you for your last letter. It was interesting to know about your Drama Club. My hobby is reading. I have recently finished reading the book “A Farewell to Arms” by Ernest Hemingway. It is a great book about sincere human feelings, love and desire to live. I advise you to read this book. I’m sure you’ll like it. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Kate |
Write a letter to Kate. In your letter thank her for her advice and tell about the book you’ve recently read.
Write 100—150 words.
C2 You have 40 minutes to do this task.
Comment on the following:
“Depression is considered to be a strange type of disease that results from a combination of physical, psychological and social factors.”
Write 200—250 words.
Use the following plan:
- make an introduction (state the problem);
- express your personal opinion and reasons for it;
- give arguments for the other point of view and explain why you don’t agree;
- draw a conclusion.
Cl You have 20 minutes to do this task.
You have received a letter from your pen friend Nick who writes:
| …I’ve found a part-time work for summer. I don’t want to waste time doing nothing. I want to get some experience and earn money. I’ll also have a chance to help my parents. And I’ll avoid asking them for pocket money when I need it to go to the cinema or to buy CDs. |
Do you think it is a good idea for teenagers to work? Do you and your friends work anywhere when you have spare time?
Write a letter to Nick. In your letter express your opinion and answer Nick’s questions.
Write 100—150 words.
C2 You have 40 minutes to do this task.
Comment on the following:
“Parents should spend more time with their kids. Some adults talk to their children only when they want to scold them for something. And often parents don’t even try to understand their children.”
What is your opinion?
Write 200—250 words.
Use the following plan:
- make an introduction (state the problem);
- express your personal opinion and reasons for it;
- give arguments for the other point of view and explain why you don’t agree;
- draw a conclusion.
Эссе и письмо в егэ по английскому языку
Choosing a role model has always had a great impact on people’s lives. While doing a project on who can be a role model to a modern teenager, I have found some data in the form of a table that I would like to analyse and comment on.
According to the information in the given table, singer appears in the results as the most popular choice of a role model, supported by 74% of those surveyed.
